" Come on guy!" screamed Josh at the sailor in front of him . Suddenly he felt a great rumble . He turned on his radio and it said " Today in Venice, we just experienced a very dramatic earthquake."
" No one would imagine traffic on water!" exclaimed Josh . Then he heard a great cracking noise . A building was falling right above him. " Seriously!" complaind Josh , " Today is a bad day!" Then he slammed the reverse switch and nearly crashed into the boat behind him . helooked in front of him and saw two boats sink.
" Hey dude, help me!" cried a scruffy,deep voice
" I can't! I'm being sucked under water!" screamed Josh
Nice descriptions and use of dialog!!
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